Elusive Mind

This poem gives an account to the baffling state of my mind while I look at d surroundings!!
When I look at the night sky;
The moon seems to be like a pie.
While I see the stars twinkle,
My mind blogs round and thoughts mingle.
IS this the world we live in;
Is this the air we breathe,
Our life trapped in melodies...
Looking for the answers in my life,
Will I be alone, will you be there about my side.
Something my mind said, I wonder why?
Really searching for the answers, still alive.
WO! my whole sum heart sings,
Let there be purity,
Serene skies and bright blue sea.
OH MY GOD! Keep this Earth evergreen!!!
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Published: 4/26/2010
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