Do You Remember The First Time?

Do you have someone you share something so precious with? If you do then read this short story. Comment if you please.
I like to see her smile even when I look in her eyes I get butterfly's. Her name is Marrisa Stone Gray and I think I'm in love with her. I have known her since we were seven years old. I still remember when I first set eyes on her.....

"Sweetheart it's me Jacob can you hear me?"
The pale figure in the bed didn't even nudge. He sighed and held her cold hand in his warm grasp. "You'll make it out of this and we'll live a happy life."

It was a cool spring evening and my mother and her new boss were talking over a cup of tea. They told me to go find you and play so I ran around the huge weeping willow behind the house and I saw you laying in a meadow of brilliant flowers. Of course at that age I thought about how pretty your hair looked when the sun shone on it. You have the most amazing titan red hair I've ever laid my emerald-green eyes on sweetheart. Anyway I ran up to you and you screamed for me to go away. I didn't understand why you were so mad at me so I gave you a hug like I did for mommy when she started to have water fall out of her eyes.

You stayed rock still until I heard you crying and I told you everything would be alright. That's when you finally looked me in the eyes and I told you that your eyes were almost see through. You have the most amazing light blue eyes I have ever seen. Amazing because if the sun hits them they shine like water glistening. You told me your papa had just died and this is where you came to cry. I said that I was sorry he died and you shrugged saying it was whatever. I told you I would always be there for you and then I heard my mother calling for me. I said we would meet again some time and you just nodded waving as I ran around the weeping willow with one last glance at your tiny figure sitting alone in the meadow.


"Do you remember that my love?"
The figure in the bed didn't make a noise and he sighed and kissed her forehead.
"When your ready to wake up I'll be waiting here for you."
He stood up and began to walk towards the window when something snagged his hand.
He turned around and his eyes went immediately to her light blue eyes. "Your awake."
She smiled. "Where is the baby Jacob?"
He smirked and left the room real quick returning with a baby girl with bright bluish-green eyes and light brown hair mixed with some of Jacobs blonde.

"What do we name her Marrisa? She doesn't have a name yet."
She stared into her eyes and whispered. "We'll name her Serenity because her eyes are just so....serene."
"She didn't cry when she came out we thought she was dead. She is unique and we shall love her for our whole lives."
Marrisa nodded and stroked the baby's soft skin. "And Jacob I do remember that day."
What did this story make you think of?
A happy couple who has a great life ahead of them.
A memory from the past that will always be remembered.
Close enough to a memory I had with a friend or partner.
Memorys that I have had.
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Published: 6/4/2010
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