Distant Love

This is a poem written by my sister Nyrelle. It is called "Distant Love". She really wants to know you guyz's honest opinions. So please, comment! Thank you!
I think of you every night
Funny how I don't die in fright
My grandmmas gives me chips so stale
My boyfriend is not that pale

I go to school learning my ones and two's
I learn and learn about why people just grunt and pout
Not much to think about

Your looks are so sexy and divine
Thank God you are already mine
Your smile lights up a show
Just like the sun over a rainbow

Thank you for reading my poem
This person, you may not know him
But I just adore him
How did you like her poem?
What? I don't understand...
This was a good poem
I hope you write more poems
Needs improvement...
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Published: 5/3/2010
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