Death was Coming, and It was Coming Soon

This is about a girl that finds this barn in the forest and it traps her in it and she has to find her way out it's not just a barn it's a magical barn.
It was 11.14 in the morning. me and my step sister were bored so we decided to take a walk in the forest. We always get to a certain point then we have to turn around. It's our parents rules. were only 14 and 13 so we have to listen.
I was wearing my pink shorts witch I should not have. The trees scraping my legs I had bruises and cuts. I also had my tank top on witch was bad to it was hot out but I wasn't thinking of the tress and animals and stuff.

Me and ash got to the spot we looked around, we thought we must have gone to far because in front of us was a barn a red broken barn.
We should turn around said ash my sister. We went to far Paige we have to go now. no I said this is the place the spot we need to stop at I no it is. Why would someone put a barn in the middle of the forest. come on she said yanking my hand.
Wait I said stay here. I walk closer ash was yelling my name. I opened the door hearing a screeching while the door opened. I covered my ears and took a step back. All off a sudden a huge breeze pulled me and ash in to the barn.

I could not see anything it was dark I herd my heart beeting. ash? I whispered. Paige were are u. all of a sudden lights came on. Ahh we screamed and got up and held arms scared to death. We looked around it was an empty barn the door was shut. the lights were on.
Wait paige there is no power up here how do we get lights. We looked at each other and ran for the door. We both ran smack dab in to it. We feel back to see a guy in a black drench coat. Ahh! we screamed flipping over to stand up.
Hello girls the gay said taking a step closer. I pushed ash back because it was my job to protect her. I'm not going to hurt u he said. He took another step forward. I could hear my heart beep.
What do u want I said pushing ash behind my back.
YOU he said smiling.
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Published: 4/12/2010
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