Death from Beyond

This poem is my first poem ever and it is not the best poem ever nor is it the friendliest but it just came to me one night in bed. Please comment truthfully, thanks.
That's it, I'm done, no more trying
I'm sick of all this f*cking lying
You finally drove me completely insane
And now my life will continue in pain
I hope you’re happy with what you've done
Cause now its time to finish my run
With this gun I hold to my head
I'll die right here lying on my bed
The cuts on my wrists were just the start
Only to distract the pain in my heart
And now I'm finally done with it all
My brains will splatter all over the wall
And in the morning my body will be found
Screams of terror will be the only sound
And in my hand there is a note
The reason I did it is what I wrote
For on that night one year ago
My heart took a tragic blow
As i witnessed my lover's death
For she too pulled the trigger on her final death

By cory wood
Published: 7/16/2008
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