Day in the Park

Hey guys!!! I'm new here and well I wrote a really short story, it's my first time actually publishing my work so bare with me and comment good or bad please =) -Ash
Walking through the park I see him. Sitting there on the green grass his back press against a tree playing his guitar with the summer breeze flowing through his brown hair. He hums my favorite song as if he knew I was coming to the park today. Without a thought I sit next to him, lean against the tree and start singing the song he was playing on his guitar. I watch as he moves his fingers on the six strings and after a while He stops and smiles at me, my heart flutters like a hummingbirds heart. I stop singing and smile back at him. He tells me "I've been waiting for you." I automatically froze, I didn't understand what he was saying when he said "I've been waiting for you." Did he mean as in I want to be with you? or I love you or I can't spend that much time away from you or like the best friends we are, I've missed you. So many thoughts ran through my head I didn't know what to say back till he broke my train of thoughts and started playing with his guitar again. All I could say in a faint whisper was "yeah I've been waiting for you too."
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Published: 3/28/2011
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