Darkest Story Ever Told

This is a continuation of the truth shawna gave me an idea to finish my story.
I wanna tell you the darkest story ever told

It is a story that will tear you, and leave you sad and cold

It is about a little girl who got hurt and the guy who left her in the dirt

It is a dark cold night outside and they are laying side by side

She was six years old he was sixteen as was told

To her he was a brother she wished she thought she was lucky then it went bad

He looked down at her with a gleam in his eye, she knew she should stop him but didn't even try

All his weight on top ripping and making her scream

She always wishes till this day it was a dream

It hurt so bad she cried

But no one knew that, that night all of her died

A few years later he became part of the family he married in

When he looks at her he smiles she gets sick then
What do you think?
Good
Great
Bad
Terrible
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Published: 1/17/2011
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