Dark Waters - Chapter 1 - Jaclyn's Club

Hunter goes to an old friend, the last dragon shape shifter, for 'girl help'.
Thanks everyone for reading. Please continue to vote and comment on the stories. Sorry that this part is so short but I didn't have much time today. I'll try to make the next one extra long to make up for it. Thanks to Pebbles and Britanny for commenting on the introduction by the way. I enjoyed your comments. And thank you for the encouragement from Marion and Nicole, you guys are both great : D

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Hunter snapped out of his deep train of thought and looked up at Amanda’s window briefly before sauntering toward Jaclyn’s club. The club was called The White Demons and most of the shape shifters gathered there when in town. It was located in a building that was mostly underground and the shape shifters had a special section in which they could go if they needed to and it was inaccessible to humans and non-magical creatures.
Hunter decided to go there and ask Jaclyn for help, she knew about women. Just as Hunter walked into the club a man flew in front of him, hitting the wall on the other side. Apparently there was a fight going on.
Hunter looked toward the person who threw the one guy and saw that it was the shape shifter Mark, a falcon shape shifter. Jaclyn immediately was there, putting the falcon into a full nelson.

Not even Hunter wanted to cross Jaclyn so he couldn’t imagine why the falcon would anger her like this. Jaclyn was a dragon shape shifter, not only the last dragon shape shifter left but also the last dragon left that they knew about. Most humans thought that dragons weren’t real but they had no idea how insane this world really was.
Jaclyn snarled at the whole room and it went deathly silent. Everyone listened.
"Do you all want Le Conseil to come and close down the club and kill off some of us! Like they did after that one big fight a few weeks ago!" she says, knowing no humans were in hearing distance.
"Mark. Geru. No more fighting! I don’t care if your both birds of prey. I will kill you both if you put anyone else in this club in danger!" Jaclyn growled, letting go of Mark before catching sight of Hunter.

Jaclyn immediately relaxes some and walks over to Hunter,
"Welcome back to town panther! Nice to see you around again. How’s it goin?" she asks, her eyes curious as to why Hunter seems to be glowing in happiness but also sad at the same time.
Jaclyn had known Hunter ever since he was born since she had been a long time friend of the family since before the dark ages. Hunter had been a daring little kid, always trying new things and never having the least self doubt. His bronze hair had darkened over time until now it was chocolaty colored, the same as his eyes which were speckled with silver. He stood over Jaclyn now and, even though he had always looked younger, now looked older and worn.

"I need a bit of help Jaclyn… girl help," Hunter admitted, looking away from her face. Jaclyn chuckled and pulled him into one of the rooms for shape shifters.
"So you think you found your mate?" Jaclyn asks, crossing her arms over her chest. Hunter sighs and shrugs,
"I’m not sure if she’s my mate… and I plan on finding out… but I’d like to be nice to her anyway… maybe if we aren’t mates… we could try and become mates… or something," Hunter says, practically mumbling and seeming very unsure of himself.
Jaclyn chuckles and pats Hunter’s head,
"Fine, I’ll tell you a bit about women…"

By Tessa Myren
Published: 5/29/2009
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