Dark Seduction/Deadly Game/The Angel's Heart
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I'm please that people like A Dark Seduction and The Angel's Heart. I am not sure if I should continue a Deadly Game or not.....
But as for me getting a lot of stories out there, I guess it's because I've been really busy. I"ll not lie to anyone. The truth is, is that I'm 13 yrs old and I'm using a pen name by the way. That's why my stories, aren't well, actually good, you know.
Title: (Can't Think of One)
I drifted, I dreamed.... I floated until I could float no more.
I saw him. Matthew. He was waiting for me as always in 'the dream realm,'. He was beautiful, like he was my guardian angel. He was a lot taller than me and unlike me, he had a mysterious aura surrounding him.
He held out a hand to me. I took it and was instantly transported to 'his' world. The Other World.
I saw an army, that stretched across the plains. We were standing on a hill that overlooked both armies. The grass was as green as could be and it stretched out as far as the eye could see.
The Red against the Blue. I saw a man on a grey horse, but as peered more closely I saw that it was Matthew. His arms tightened around me. 'That' Matthew, gave a war cry and lead the army to charge at the Blue.
I stiffened. i never liked war, and I never saw the reason for it. They charged at one another. There was fighting and there was bloodshed. Soon, the once green pasture was soaked with crimson red blood. I was horrified.
I still saw Matthew, he was one of the few survivors of his army. Just as I thought all would be all right. A cry rang out, not of distress, but of hatred. I looked to the left, and saw a Blue with a cross and arrow. He aimed and fired.
Directly at Matthew.
Just as I screamed, we were transported again. This time to a castle, overlooking the sea. I was crying.
"Why didn't you tell me, the arrow..." I sobbed, he crushed me to his chest and stroked my hair. I looked up at him.
"Tell me every thing's going to be alright. Tell me!"
Matthew looked away. It couldn't be true. It couldn't
"Chloe, I may not make it," he said.
"NO!" I wailed, there had to be another way.
"The arrow, hit me on my side, I lost a lot of blood,"
But I kept sobbing, denying it.
He shook me, "Listen, even if I do cease to exist, I want you to promise me, that one day, you will find a man, who can keep you safe, a man that you can love,"
I was shaking my head before he had even finished.
"There will be no other," I cried. The thought of loving someone other than Matthew, was surprisingly painful.
"You will live, you have to, maybe if I-"
"No. There is no other way. Kiss me Chloe, for I may not wake up from this sleep and if I do die, I want it to be with your kiss on my lips"
I kissed him. Why oh why dear God? Don't let him die. I would save him. But how could I save a man who was born 600 years before I existed?
Soooo,,,, that's my short exercise this time. Don't worry I'll get A Dark Seduction and The Angel's Heart out as soon as possible.
I'm still in school and have a lot of homework. I have to get speeches and a few essays done.
I HATE speeches, I absolutely hate them. So wish me luck guys. But I've almost finished A Dark Seduction 3 and will post it really soon. So please be patient. I know I'm not, you know, good at writing, I guess that's because I'm 13 but, please go easy on me with your comments. I do the best I can.
Thanx. What did you think of the story above?
But as for me getting a lot of stories out there, I guess it's because I've been really busy. I"ll not lie to anyone. The truth is, is that I'm 13 yrs old and I'm using a pen name by the way. That's why my stories, aren't well, actually good, you know.
Title: (Can't Think of One)
I drifted, I dreamed.... I floated until I could float no more.
I saw him. Matthew. He was waiting for me as always in 'the dream realm,'. He was beautiful, like he was my guardian angel. He was a lot taller than me and unlike me, he had a mysterious aura surrounding him.
He held out a hand to me. I took it and was instantly transported to 'his' world. The Other World.
I saw an army, that stretched across the plains. We were standing on a hill that overlooked both armies. The grass was as green as could be and it stretched out as far as the eye could see.
The Red against the Blue. I saw a man on a grey horse, but as peered more closely I saw that it was Matthew. His arms tightened around me. 'That' Matthew, gave a war cry and lead the army to charge at the Blue.
I stiffened. i never liked war, and I never saw the reason for it. They charged at one another. There was fighting and there was bloodshed. Soon, the once green pasture was soaked with crimson red blood. I was horrified.
I still saw Matthew, he was one of the few survivors of his army. Just as I thought all would be all right. A cry rang out, not of distress, but of hatred. I looked to the left, and saw a Blue with a cross and arrow. He aimed and fired.
Directly at Matthew.
Just as I screamed, we were transported again. This time to a castle, overlooking the sea. I was crying.
"Why didn't you tell me, the arrow..." I sobbed, he crushed me to his chest and stroked my hair. I looked up at him.
"Tell me every thing's going to be alright. Tell me!"
Matthew looked away. It couldn't be true. It couldn't
"Chloe, I may not make it," he said.
"NO!" I wailed, there had to be another way.
"The arrow, hit me on my side, I lost a lot of blood,"
But I kept sobbing, denying it.
He shook me, "Listen, even if I do cease to exist, I want you to promise me, that one day, you will find a man, who can keep you safe, a man that you can love,"
I was shaking my head before he had even finished.
"There will be no other," I cried. The thought of loving someone other than Matthew, was surprisingly painful.
"You will live, you have to, maybe if I-"
"No. There is no other way. Kiss me Chloe, for I may not wake up from this sleep and if I do die, I want it to be with your kiss on my lips"
I kissed him. Why oh why dear God? Don't let him die. I would save him. But how could I save a man who was born 600 years before I existed?
Soooo,,,, that's my short exercise this time. Don't worry I'll get A Dark Seduction and The Angel's Heart out as soon as possible.
I'm still in school and have a lot of homework. I have to get speeches and a few essays done.
I HATE speeches, I absolutely hate them. So wish me luck guys. But I've almost finished A Dark Seduction 3 and will post it really soon. So please be patient. I know I'm not, you know, good at writing, I guess that's because I'm 13 but, please go easy on me with your comments. I do the best I can.
Thanx. What did you think of the story above?

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