Dance Of The Shadows

Ok I usually hate my poems but this one I think is pretty good (: plz comment)
I see the shadows dancing
Feeding off my fear
I hear the hollow words being sung
Ringing through my ears
I watch them as they twirl
Twisting into shape
Following my heartbeat
Picking up the pace
Another shadow forms
Then two more after he
Until I am surrounded
In this nightmare sea
Pressing down against me
Make me lose my breathe
Make me trip and fall
Falling off my feet
Falling into darkness
Still they seem to dance
Still they seem to sing.
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Published: 10/30/2010
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