Curious Blood - Chpt. 1

Curiosity killed the cat but it almost killed Prosper too. How can she stop the incredible urge to find out why she almost died? THIS IS THE BEGINNING!! Plz comment and do the poll! Thanks! :D
I am slipping the darkness knows this and it settles down beside me trying to comfort me in the only way it can. I don't fight and gradually I start to lose myself in the total blackness. With heavy eyelids I watch through half slits of the life I am drifting away from. The trees bending delicately in the warm wind and the soft hum of the crickets. The night playing its lone dance before the first rays of sunlight poke through its great expanse of clouds and converge into the beginning of dawn. I am dying.

The realization hits me slowly because of my foggy mind but I do not struggle. The leaves rustle on the trees around me talking to one another whispering sweet nothings and secrets never to be told. I am dying. A gentle breeze tickles my neck and plays with my hair, lifting individual strands into the air. I don't know why I don't scream when I still have my voice. I don't know why I am not panicking for my life. My mind reels at these thoughts and suddenly I feel nauseous. I hear a twig snap and then a boys voice before I choose to black out.
Should I continue?
Yes I am going to read it to the end!!
It could use some work..
I hate it! STOP WRITING!
I like it but I am confused
Go ahead! I would like more!
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Published: 1/3/2011
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