Crying for the Impossible and Unforgettable

It is a poem about love and feelings.
There is no noise all around,
Suddenly, I heard a terrifying sound,
Light was going through the night,
It left memories marked quite bright.

Those unwanted sins were brought again,
The lost love caused unforgettable pain,
Why loving you was my sin?
Unable to forget your aroma of your skin.

Our world was like a dream,
Each day was a different theme,
Those dry tears in my eyes,
Were vanished instantly by the tides.

The lonely night sees me crying,
In our heart, we are dying,
The night have ended now,
In this morning, memories are not allowed.
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Published: 11/1/2011
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