Choices? Part eight Nightmare!

Part eight. I'm sorry that it' so short but I'm still kinda adjusting to my new school and I'm really busy. I'll try to make the next one longer. Please comment. I write faster if I get them. Constructive criticism would probably help too.
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Chapter Eight Tick Tock
"No!"
"Whatcha gonna do bout it Milly?"
He wouldn't stop! He was taunting me! Holding
him just out of my reach. I wasn't strong enough! I couldn't save him.
"Please!"
I was begging now. He looked at me with his cruel, eyes free of pity and gave the order I dreaded.
"Kill him."
"Noooooooooooooo!!!!!!!"
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"Melissa!"
"No KYLE!"
"Melissa its only a dream."
She screamed again. I shook her again.
"Melissa!"
She opened her eyes. The tears were still streaming down her face. She wrapped her arms around my torso.
"I couldn't.........stop ..stop........him!"
She sobbed. I was trying to understand.
"Couldn't stop who, Love?
She cried even harder.
"My ...father."
Now I understood.
"Shush...Its okay. It was only a dream."
Her tiny frame was wretching with tears. My shirt was soaked.
We lay there in silence for the remainder of the night. She occasionally sobbed against me. We just lay there and waited for the morning to come

By Jonas Brothers Make me Sizzle!
Published: 10/6/2008
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