Bye My Love

It is a poem dedicated to the person you love and at the same time saying bye.
In this confusing night
Loneliness and darkness covers the light
Obscure petals make time out of sight
Vacuity feelings make hope and dreams fake
Eventually my heart will be heal from ache

You are the inspiration that makes my heart to keep beating
Obliged to say I love you, I keep repeating
Under my eyes, you are the queen of my story

Same queen that takes me to the glory
Once I tried to share my heart
Numerous times, you made my heart to fall apart
Yet, I do not understand your attitude towards me
Although, are thoughts I do not agree

Finally, the day has come to say bye
Observing you, leave makes me cry
Remembering your face
Elevates my heart to a beautiful space
Very few time we have left, that is why I wish you well
Empty heart feels like hell
Remember my love someday, farewell
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Published: 5/30/2011
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