Brutal Attack

Another one I'm not sure how to categorize. I just recently found it among my "poems" folder. It's exactly as the title says, a brutal attack. Enjoy. :]
Razor-sharp knife
Here to end my life.
Blood trickles down my side,
No place to hide.
I now cover my wound.

Why must I cry?
I don't want to die.
My face is pained.
You laugh at the blood stains.
I shiver and sob.

The knife flashes.
I hear crashes.
Blood spurts from my arm;
Glass is what I collapsed on.
My mind goes foggy.

I hear a pained cry,
Was it mine?
Vision tinted with red,
My beast wants fed.
I give no resistance.

Long pearly fangs,
I glare through my bangs.
My eyes turn black,
It's time to attack.
I begin the assault.

Teeth flash,
Blood splashes.
A snarl rips from my throat,
My attacker chokes.
It's time to feed.

I dive for his bloody throat,
But I'm stopped by a croak.
He whispers something
About dying.
I smile evilly.
What do you think?
Wow... Just when I thought you couldn't get any worse.
Interesting to say the least.
I see why it's called "Brutal Attack".
Interesting in a good way.
Great!
Made no sense.
Meh, it was okay. Wouldn't go further than that.
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Published: 5/6/2010
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