Brittany Dawn
Very Short. :)
I just wrote this just now like in 2 minutes. The idea just popped in my head. So tell me what you think please! I need to know if I should continue it or not
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The wind blew at the trees. The sand from nearby parks covered the sidewalk. I walked through the leaves and sand, the sun beaming down on me. I’m walking with James, we’ve been together for two years but from an outsiders point of view we look like complete strangers. He walks a few feet ahead of me, hands in his pocket, his dark brown hair flying in the wind.
"James, I have a question."
I waited for him to slow down and listen but he kept walking as if he didn’t hear me.
"Can you hear me?"
He turned and walked back to me.
"Look, I don’t love you ok?"
For the next two weeks we didn’t talk or even look at each other. We just went on with life as if nothing happened.
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The wind blew at the trees. The sand from nearby parks covered the sidewalk. I walked through the leaves and sand, the sun beaming down on me. I’m walking with James, we’ve been together for two years but from an outsiders point of view we look like complete strangers. He walks a few feet ahead of me, hands in his pocket, his dark brown hair flying in the wind.
"James, I have a question."
I waited for him to slow down and listen but he kept walking as if he didn’t hear me.
"Can you hear me?"
He turned and walked back to me.
"Look, I don’t love you ok?"
For the next two weeks we didn’t talk or even look at each other. We just went on with life as if nothing happened.
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