Blood Diary

This Story is about a girl named Alyzza and a boy named Jake. They are both Vampire Hunters and on a quest to destroy Vampires to take revenge on their parents. (That is a pic of Alyzza).
On one hot summer day, not all the people in Vaile City were stuck in their houses. While stuck in their houses, Alyzza and Jake was busy thinking of something to do on a Tuesday morning. Wearing a black t-shirt and ripped jeans Alyzza got up and screamed, "I am bored!". Her voice echoed throughout the house. "Alyzza just because you have your period on does not mean you have to share the pain with everybody else." Said Jake as he turned over and laid his head on a pillow.

See me and Jake are regular ordinary teenagers. We go to high school, make good grades, and even play a sport. Most people would classify us as the emo people of the school. Yes we may scare people sometimes, but I think they are just jealous of what we are. I think we are pretty normal though.

As I walked down the stairs and the stairs creaked softly as one foot hit each one, I said, "Jake hurry up! We are going to be late for school." I don't know what his problem is. He never misses a day, especially the first day of school. What's important is, this is our senior year. "Alyzza, stop getting on my nerves. You're acting like mom." Said Jake as he stepped off the steps and grabbed him a piece of toast. As he put the toast in mouth I said, "Jake I am glad people didn't find out what we really are, especially Vile. He would be pissed off at me." I said as I looked down with a gloomy look on my face.

"Hey if you keep your mouth shut maybe nobody would find out Aly." Said Jake as he tapped my head lightly. I guess Jake knew about the consequences if people knew. I don't want anybody to suffer, not anymore after what happened to our parents. They died when me and Jake was only 5 by vampires. "Jake mom and dad didn't deserve dying. That's why I hate vampires and I will continue fighting them off." I said while walking away with my book bag in my hand depressed. Suddenly I felt a hand touch my hand. "Alyzza don't move." Jake said while pushing in front of me. What is he doing? "Jake....." I said while quickly realizing the faint smell of blood. I guess our fight wasn't really over after all.
How was the first chapter?
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Published: 5/4/2010
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