Blood Diary - Chapter 6 - Part 2

Part Two - This is when Alyzza figures out who Jake really is to her.
"Ugh...Vile...Don't... Leave..." I said lying there with a bruised and bloody almost unconscious body. How does he know so much about me and Jake? I don't get it. "Alyzza I left you alive for a purpose and you still continue to want to dispatch me. Don't tell me you still have those pathetic feelings for me still?" said Vile as he lowered his head and made an evil grin come upon his face. "Hah, you're an ass you know that. I used to think you were the guy of my dreams but all along I was wrong and was deceived. I am going to defeat you and even though Jake may not be my brother, I will still love him." I said while getting up and adding a wobble to my stance. I knew I didn't have enough strength to kill him, but with my last move I can do some damage at least to him.

"Well this is your suicide Alyzza. How should I kill you? You want me to gush all your blood out or just finish it with one blow?" Said Vile as he drew out his weapon and stood still. "How come you're not moving? Oh I know you want me to make the first move, but I know the rules of battle. Never make the first move unless you know for sure that you will come out victorious." I said while smiling and holding myself up. Vile just wants me to make the first move so my defense will be low and he comes out victorious. "Stop thinking so much and fight." Said Vile as he dashed behind me and hit me from behind. "UGH!" I said yelled as blood gushed out of my mouth and I flew and fell hard onto the ground. "I won't let you kill me, Vile!" I said while dashing toward him. "Alyzza you was never a very good fighter and you will never be." Said Vile as he slapped me in the face and picked me up by the throat.

"You...bastard." I said while losing my air from my lungs. Is this it for me? Jake I love you. "Let go of her!" a mysterious voice said in a far off distance. "Jake, finally you show up to join the fight." said Vile as he dropped me on the ground and stepped hard on me. "Ugh!" I said while blood shot out of my mouth."Stop hurting her." Said Jake as he rushed in for an attack on Vile. "Jake tell her the truth behind your mask. The truth to her parent's death." said Vile as he clashed into Jake. "Never. I don't want to hurt her never again". Said Jake as he pushed Vile off him. What hurt me what is he saying? "Jake...what... is he talking about." I asked while barely breathing.

"Well the truth is I'm a Vampire. I was originally set off to kill you and your parents." Said Jake as his voice got deeper and his mood changed. "What Jake that's not true. You can't be a vampire." I said deeply frightened and shocked. "It is true. When I killed your parents I couldn't bring myself to kill their precious daughter." said Jake as he turned around in guilt. "Jake you lied to me and you killed my parent's." I said while faint tears started running down my eyes. I couldn't believe it. Jake the only person I loved and my grew up with killed my parents...
Do You Think Jake Deserve's To Be With Alyzz After You Find Out He Was The One Who Killed Her Parent's?
Yes, definately because they derserve it and he didnt do that by his own will
No, because he shouldnt have done that and hurt her
Maybe, because Jake is a decent fellow
Hell No, Because I dont like Jake and he doesnt fit what she needs
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Published: 10/8/2010
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