Bliss

A sort of follow-up on Reluctant to Wake, Bliss is a story with many descriptions of waking up late at night and then falling asleep soon after. Comment Please :)
I woke, startled from my latest dream. Darkness enveloped my eyes and I couldn't see even my hands in front of my face. I was so disoriented, not fully awake but yet not fully asleep. My dream tonight had been especially strange. I hope I can sort through it in the morning, I thought sleepily. Still trying to cling to my bizarre reverie, I again sank further into my warm comforter. My heavy eyelids fell back into a familiar place as I took a deep contented breath. Laying there in complete bliss I waited patiently to fall back into a state of oblivion. Then, almost fully asleep I faintly heard the clock from downstairs strike midnight.

Hmmm....
I wonder if I'll remember....
I hope I remember....
Is Bliss an improvement since Reluctant to Wake?
Yes. You're getting better ;)
You still have some work.
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Published: 6/14/2010
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