Blind Souls

All of my poems are about death, suicide, love, vampires… I'd b so thankful if the people who read my poems left a comment about them… so that I could have an idea if my work is good enough... thx
Everyone is dying
From the moment they're born
Everyone is crying
But we're forsaken and forlorn

Disillusion shattered dreams
Destroyed visions of future
Perfection is the name of condemned themes
For a million of damned souls in overture

So many souls in torment
Reaching out to their creator
We can only lament
Because he is the betrayer

By André Ribeiro
Published: 12/25/2006
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