Black Cat... and Then Its Over Chapter 1
Aby Faith is a young girl that was just on a vacation with her parent when her life changes way south. but where will it bring her?
One the accident
"Dad" I say.
He doesn't answer.
"Hey, dad?" I repeat
"What, sweetie?" he answers with a tired voice, followed by a big yawn.
"Don't call me that, you know I don't like it! I'm too big for that."
"Sweetie, you know you will always be my little girl no matter how old you are." he says, smiling.
When mum turns around to look at me, sees my glare and starts laughing then adds:
"Yes, dad is right. Plus it's not like we call you that in public, Aby."
"But still, I mean I am 15 years old. In a month will be 16. That is why I'm demanding for you to stop calling me that." I say it in my favorite English posh accent straightening my back for a better effect.
But they just give me that look that I can't really explain and then look away.
I sink in the back seat of the car and turn my IPod on, blocking my ears and closing my eyes. We are on our way car trip. Right now we just left Phoenix. Our family have this tradition every year. 1 week we go for a car trip, every time the same course. You would think it gets boring but no, it never does. I think that's more because the time I spend with my parents, Mr and Mrs Faith, or just Chale and Scarlet. My parent work all the time, yea both of them. They usually come back from work at 7 or 8, then go and finish up whatever they have to. That's how I ended up being the cook in our house. Funny, huh?
About half an hour later we slow down and I hear my dad horn. I jump at the sound of it and look out the front window to see what's there. Black cat crossed the road and now seats in the middle of it. Dad horns again and it runs to the other side. I seat back down and look out the side window, watch the cat. Just a moment before we pass it, it winks at me and then jumps right in front of our car. Everything else I remember is a blur:
Dad the car quickly to the side.
The car turns upside down and it turns and turns and turns.
Pain at the right side of my body: leg, hand, ribs, head.
Car stops, staying upside down
Warm liquid running from my head and drips down... blood, I realize.
Then everything becomes sharp. I can feel and see and hear everything.
Knowing I need to get out as fast as I could I undo my seat belt in hope of being able to push myself out of the car and that's when I hear him moan.
I turn to my dad, as I look at him I scream. His left leg is gone, his face covered in peaces of glass from the front window. Clothes soaking with blood, reaped with the glass from the window. Tears form in my eyes and a sob escapes my throat. I want to turn around and look at mum, but my dad reaches for me and says:
"Get out of here, now!"
As he sees that I am not moving, just sitting there with silent tears falling from my eyes he wipes one of them and says:
"Don't cry sweetie. We love you, just go."
I look at him for another moment and without another glance back I get out. I push my self out feeling all the pain and screaming but still knowing there is nobody to help. As I drag myself further from the car I take out my phone and call the police. Tell the policeman where about are we and just as she asks my name... the car blows up.
I can't believe I'm seeing it and I scream, for my mum, for my dad, when a metal bar flies towards me because of another smaller explosion at the front of the car, right through my stomach. I feel the pain a second after I see the blood coming out. It hurts like hell and I feel so dizzy and everything blurs... I scream because of pain, because I'm helpless, because I'm angry, because it seems like the right thing to do, the only thing. And I think all my preys are heard when I see a shape coming towards me. I flip my head to see who is coming. When I see that black cat I just freeze with shock and fear.
I don't even notice him coming until he leans forward, smiling. He is a really handsome boy about 17 years old. He bends down and it looks like he is about to kiss me... I hold my breath, but not because I am scared. It's because I don't feel pain any more, the second he touched me it was replaced with overwhelming warmth. But the moment his teeth bite into my neck all I can feel the pain. Then I black out.
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Kind of short but it is just a start I promise to make the chapter stretch out as they go. Please forgive me for mistakes. English is my foreign language. Please comment. it's very important for me. I will try answering you as I go x thanks
"Dad" I say.
He doesn't answer.
"Hey, dad?" I repeat
"What, sweetie?" he answers with a tired voice, followed by a big yawn.
"Don't call me that, you know I don't like it! I'm too big for that."
"Sweetie, you know you will always be my little girl no matter how old you are." he says, smiling.
When mum turns around to look at me, sees my glare and starts laughing then adds:
"Yes, dad is right. Plus it's not like we call you that in public, Aby."
"But still, I mean I am 15 years old. In a month will be 16. That is why I'm demanding for you to stop calling me that." I say it in my favorite English posh accent straightening my back for a better effect.
But they just give me that look that I can't really explain and then look away.
I sink in the back seat of the car and turn my IPod on, blocking my ears and closing my eyes. We are on our way car trip. Right now we just left Phoenix. Our family have this tradition every year. 1 week we go for a car trip, every time the same course. You would think it gets boring but no, it never does. I think that's more because the time I spend with my parents, Mr and Mrs Faith, or just Chale and Scarlet. My parent work all the time, yea both of them. They usually come back from work at 7 or 8, then go and finish up whatever they have to. That's how I ended up being the cook in our house. Funny, huh?
About half an hour later we slow down and I hear my dad horn. I jump at the sound of it and look out the front window to see what's there. Black cat crossed the road and now seats in the middle of it. Dad horns again and it runs to the other side. I seat back down and look out the side window, watch the cat. Just a moment before we pass it, it winks at me and then jumps right in front of our car. Everything else I remember is a blur:
Dad the car quickly to the side.
The car turns upside down and it turns and turns and turns.
Pain at the right side of my body: leg, hand, ribs, head.
Car stops, staying upside down
Warm liquid running from my head and drips down... blood, I realize.
Then everything becomes sharp. I can feel and see and hear everything.
Knowing I need to get out as fast as I could I undo my seat belt in hope of being able to push myself out of the car and that's when I hear him moan.
I turn to my dad, as I look at him I scream. His left leg is gone, his face covered in peaces of glass from the front window. Clothes soaking with blood, reaped with the glass from the window. Tears form in my eyes and a sob escapes my throat. I want to turn around and look at mum, but my dad reaches for me and says:
"Get out of here, now!"
As he sees that I am not moving, just sitting there with silent tears falling from my eyes he wipes one of them and says:
"Don't cry sweetie. We love you, just go."
I look at him for another moment and without another glance back I get out. I push my self out feeling all the pain and screaming but still knowing there is nobody to help. As I drag myself further from the car I take out my phone and call the police. Tell the policeman where about are we and just as she asks my name... the car blows up.
I can't believe I'm seeing it and I scream, for my mum, for my dad, when a metal bar flies towards me because of another smaller explosion at the front of the car, right through my stomach. I feel the pain a second after I see the blood coming out. It hurts like hell and I feel so dizzy and everything blurs... I scream because of pain, because I'm helpless, because I'm angry, because it seems like the right thing to do, the only thing. And I think all my preys are heard when I see a shape coming towards me. I flip my head to see who is coming. When I see that black cat I just freeze with shock and fear.
I don't even notice him coming until he leans forward, smiling. He is a really handsome boy about 17 years old. He bends down and it looks like he is about to kiss me... I hold my breath, but not because I am scared. It's because I don't feel pain any more, the second he touched me it was replaced with overwhelming warmth. But the moment his teeth bite into my neck all I can feel the pain. Then I black out.
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Kind of short but it is just a start I promise to make the chapter stretch out as they go. Please forgive me for mistakes. English is my foreign language. Please comment. it's very important for me. I will try answering you as I go x thanks
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