Bite My Tongue

This is a poem to just describe how I was feeling at the time...kind of sad. I just thought it would be interesting to get critique or comments on it. Thanks.
Sinking with pain,
I bite my tongue.

Soul bound in a mortal case,
I am desperate to move
To show just one sign I am still alive
To prove to myself I must move on,
To do something with my life.

The hurting prevails
Flash goes the hope
Destroyed by inner agony
Silent screaming
Masked suffering
Hushed anguish.

By maria hwang
Published: 6/14/2007 		Your Contributions: Tell us a Poem! You don't have to be a Buzzle.com author to contribute to Poetry Bee. Submit a poem of your own right now!
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