Behind these Eyes

Rose is different, will her past haunt her? or will she move forward?
ok guys, well i wrote a new story, cos lets face it, the other one was a total fail. Please comment guys!
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I stared blankly at the mirror, I had changed. My blonde hair now had pink streaks; my once cheerful blue eyes stared back at me coldly. I had changed.
2 years had passed since the accident, 2 years living with my half-brother and mother, 2 years since everything ended for me. 2 years ago when everything was perfect.
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I walked to school in silence, people stared, but I didn't care. Why should I care when no one cared for me? Silently I stand down at my desk, alone, and waited for the teacher. "Today's a new year Rose, a new school. Please try fit in" My mum had said at breakfast. Why would you care if I fit in, it's your fault I stand out, I thought to myself then.

But now I knew why, sitting in front of me was my half-brother, grinning madly as he turned around to face me. I suppose she wants her gorgeous son to have a normal life here, without people always talking about his "weird" half-sister.
"So Rose how do you like it so far?" he grinned at me. I stared blankly ahead; I didn't want anything to do with him. "Roooseee" he waved his hand madly in front my face, knowing he'd piss me off. "Anyone in that pretty head of yours?" he grinned stroking my head with the back of his hand. "Just fucking leaves me alone" I whispered coldly. "Oh babies don't be like that" he laughed, as I moved away to another seat.
I sat down once again, far away from Brad. I hated him; he always thought he'd get every girl. But why wouldn't he? He was popular, gorgeous and a complete man whore. That's what people around here wanted.

"Hey, that guys a complete jerk, ignore him. Are you ok?" came as deep voice from behind me. I turned around, and came eye to eye with the most beautiful person in the world. His green eyes stared back at me full of concern. "Umm, hello?" he asked, his face moving into a deep frown. "Uh, yeah I'm fine" I replied blushing. "My names Danny and you are..?" his face softened. "Rose" I whispered back, turning around just in time to see the new teacher. "Ok children, books open to page 45, William Shakespeare" he boomed to the class, but I couldn't hear anything. All I could hear was the soft breathing behind me, of the person I could never get.
What do you think so far?
Amazing
Yeah, dont continue
Cant Wait!
Its ok, could be better
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Published: 8/13/2009
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