BEACH WALK
This poem deals with a girl who lost her love but is not still lamenting for his death but is taking everything positively and takes this as a new beginning not an pitiful end. PLEASE COMMENT. I would like to know your suggestions, criticism etc. ............................thank you...........................
Sitting by the lake on an old bench
Watching the workers on the other side digging trench,
I remembered that beach walk so delight,
We both reminiscing our first meet in twilight.
Holding hands with our legs in foamy water,
With the silence so eloquent,
And the moon began to agleam a bit later,
Everything perfect and there he bent,
Down on his knees and gallntly proposed me.
My eyes gleamed with wonder,
I glimpsed this as fantasy like a dreamer,
I always felt like a gorse, cared by no one
I couldn't believe I'm loved by someone.
"My love has no terms,
It doesn't stop you from loving others,
It is eternal, divine and sacred,
When I am gone, just find love everywhere,
This will help you to be happy and inspire you to live life merrily"-he explained with a glint of care.
He is always with me eying me from heaven,
He's my own aspen tree,
Who helps me out even when I'm in a little pain with his words spoken,
His love has not bordered me but have set me free.
He is my perfect song of inspiration,
This world is full of different kinds of love and affection,
And I have found them all nearer,
I never miss him but I'll remember him forever.
This is not my story, it is just a single chapter from it.
I heard sound of footsteps coming towards me
"Let's go to beach mum, father is waiting", said my son.
"Yea dear." I said. I have a family with a husband and a son.
Everyday I go for a beach walk and it is always my source of inspiration.
Never let your yesterday be an eclipse over your life, it should be the sun to give rays of hope.
It should not be the sun of the dusk but the sun of the dawn.
..................................................o-o-o...........................................................
Watching the workers on the other side digging trench,
I remembered that beach walk so delight,
We both reminiscing our first meet in twilight.
Holding hands with our legs in foamy water,
With the silence so eloquent,
And the moon began to agleam a bit later,
Everything perfect and there he bent,
Down on his knees and gallntly proposed me.
My eyes gleamed with wonder,
I glimpsed this as fantasy like a dreamer,
I always felt like a gorse, cared by no one
I couldn't believe I'm loved by someone.
"My love has no terms,
It doesn't stop you from loving others,
It is eternal, divine and sacred,
When I am gone, just find love everywhere,
This will help you to be happy and inspire you to live life merrily"-he explained with a glint of care.
He is always with me eying me from heaven,
He's my own aspen tree,
Who helps me out even when I'm in a little pain with his words spoken,
His love has not bordered me but have set me free.
He is my perfect song of inspiration,
This world is full of different kinds of love and affection,
And I have found them all nearer,
I never miss him but I'll remember him forever.
This is not my story, it is just a single chapter from it.
I heard sound of footsteps coming towards me
"Let's go to beach mum, father is waiting", said my son.
"Yea dear." I said. I have a family with a husband and a son.
Everyday I go for a beach walk and it is always my source of inspiration.
Never let your yesterday be an eclipse over your life, it should be the sun to give rays of hope.
It should not be the sun of the dusk but the sun of the dawn.
..................................................o-o-o...........................................................
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