Baby I Can't Live Without You

This is a love poem.. I put it together in five minutes.. so it's not perfect. But Please comment and give me feedback on it to improve it.
Feeling Bruised and Battered,
Don't Know a Thing No More.
Feeling Lost and Lonely,
Wishing You Were Here To Just Hold Me Like Before.
Love Me Like I Know You Do,
Make My Heart Feel Stronger and Brand New.
My Life Without You Is Screwed,
Cause Baby I Can't Live Without You.

My Heart Beats Faster With A Thought,
One I Wish That Had Been Long Forgot.
A Thought You Planted In My Brain,
One That Will Make Me Go Insane.

I Just Need To Feel Alive,
But Not With Any Other Guys,
Cause No One Will Make Me Feel Like You Do.
Making My Heart Feel Strong and Brand New.
Baby Don't You Know,
I Can't Live Without You.
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Published: 5/4/2011
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