Awaken

Just a simple poem I wrote last morning (yeah, like at 2:00). Cant really tell you what it means to me, a poem is all about what it means to the reader, AKA: You. so hows it? ENJOY!!!
I'm fading. I'm fading...
Fading like a dream you know you've had
But cannot remember once you've woken.

But I cannot wake from this slumber,
This numbing sleep.
I cannot wake. I cannot wake.

But I must. I must concentrate!
I have seen too much! I must save myself from what I've befallen upon!
I awaken with a start.

A dream, floating on the surface,
Begging to be remembered, but I can't.
I just can't.

The dream slips further as
Reality comes in, to play.

By Jazmine Kennedy
Published: 6/10/2009
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What'd you think?
Its way too obvious you wrote this at 2:00
I'm so confused!!!!
What??? that was horrible!!!
WOAH... that was SO GOOD!
I loved it!! write more!!!!
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