Apart

I found this poem that I wrote a few months back. A poem about a girl who’s dying inside and trying to bleed out the hurt.....tell me what you think please
She thought she was free
No longer in the dark
But when she looked closer
All she could see was the mark

Happy, all smiles
Good thoughts in her head
No more bad feelings
Till she laid on the bed

Wrapped up in a towel
Fan going full blast
She couldn't feel the surroundings
All she could think of was the past

How could I be that stupid
Was what I felt true
My main reason for marking
Turned out to be you

I love you and always will
Don’t get me wrong
It's just that I'm dying
From being apart for so long

She tried to bleed out tears
For it made her feel full
But the knife did not work
It was too dull

She pressed so hard
Her fingers turned white
Only whelps it did leave
On her wrist that night

Please tell me what you think, and check out my other poems on here!!

By Cassie Voyles
Published: 12/1/2007 		Your Contributions: Tell us a Poem! You don't have to be a Buzzle.com author to contribute to Poetry Bee. Submit a poem of your own right now!
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