Angels & Demons Intro + Chaps 1

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Introduction

"But But Derick-" I pleaded with him
"No Belle.I'm sorry but Angels and Demons Just don't mix" Derick said
"I thought you loved me?" I said as a las attempt to get him to stay
"Not any more" He said and with that he was gone.

Part 1 Broken Hearts
Chapter1

*Ethan*
I clutched my chest I felt as if my heart was breaking. Damn him I thought.He must have hurt Belle. I could fell her pain. Just like I could hear her thoughts. We were both Just thankful our wings weren't here yet. We both knew we would feel hell when they came. Belle? Belle where are you? I asked in my head. At the park will you come pick me up?
Or course I'm on my way I said and went to go get her.
The ride back home was silent. Belle looked so lost hurt. If he ever comes back I swear I'll kill him.

By Diva James
Published: 6/11/2009
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