Angels & Demons Chap 3

Here's Chapter 3 tell me what you think.
Chapter 3

*Tre*

"Mom! I'm going outside" I said.
"Ok sweetie" my mom said as she put the dishes away from the boxes. I went outside and looked around my new neighborhood. I hope my parents liked this place. I was tired of moving every few months. I walked down the street and saw a girl jumping and screaming for Charlie "I walked over to see if I could help her.
*Ethan*
"Is everything ok over here?" A boy came up and asked
"NO!" Belle cried " He wont give charlie back" She said and plopped down on the grass and started plucking the blades
"Dude can you please give Charlie? back to her"
I jumped out of the tree and landed it front of the boy
"What kind of fun would that be if I LET her win? Who are you anyways?"
"I'm Tre I just moved in" he said and pointed to 4 houses down
"Well I'm Ethan and this is my twin sister Belle your trying to help"
"That she is" he said
"What do u mean by that"I asked. Yea I'm a little over protective of Belle
Tre laughed "Belle means Beautiful in French" I turned around and tossed Belle her camera.She then went inside with sugar.
"She doesn't talk much" I said to Tre who was watching Belle.
"What is that?"
"Our parents were murdered 1 year ago and..and she found them"
"Oh I'm sorry I didn't mean to pry"He said
"Its ok" He didn't look convinced" Really it is the more I talk about it the better it is for both of us"I said with a smile
"Oh ok umm this is gonna sound grade school but will you guys be my friends?" Tre asked. I laughed. Then looked at the living room window and saw Belle
"Sure I think Belle would like that" I said
"Cool I'll come over tomorrow"Tre said then left.

By Diva James
Published: 6/12/2009
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