Angelo Dizon's Island Castaway

This is very short sorry.
Spark jumped out of the tree and started to fight off the wolves with a stick. I jumped down too and tried to help, but Spark didn't want me to. He made some grunts that indicated he wanted me to run, so I did. I didn't stop until I got to the beach, there I built a fire and fell asleep.

The next morning I awoke to find I was alone, just like when I first washed up. Spark was nowhere to be found. 'He's not dead, he's probably just hiding from the wolves.' I thought, then got up and looked around, 'Well, I came here to build a raft, and that's what I gona do.'

I set to work, finding logs, vines, food and water, everything I needed for a raft. I built the base out of bamboo, the stuff was perfect, being light and sturdy. I built a sail, by weaving palm leaves together. The whole thing took me about 3 days to finish, Spark was still nowhere in sight. 'Oh well, Guess I'll have to leave without him.' And with that, I pushed the raft into the foaming ocean. Hoping, that I would find a boat or something to rescue me.

It had been five days out at sea, still no sign of life or land. I was starting to give up hope, I lied down and let sleep consume me.
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Published: 9/11/2010
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