Angelic Wings

I wrote this when I was younger.
As my eyes fell upon her,
All other life ceased to exist.

She, so small in the world,
Stood out like a mountain in a valley far and wide.

Her eyes, deep as the sea, were as bright as the sun;
Her glowing face pierced even the darkness of space.

I let time, pass to see
If she might unfurl her angel wings
And fly off into the sunset
Where she will most surely touch the clouds
And sing.
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Published: 12/27/2010
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