An Unwanted Visitor
This is my first time so be easy on me. Comments and tips would be helpful :)
It’s 5:45am, why the hell am I awake?! As my eyes adjusted to the bright sun shinning though my window, I heard a loud THUD in the kitchen. Half unconscious, I grabbed my robe and stumbled to my door. I tripped on the last step, I scrapped my knee it stung but then I noticed a ghastly smell coming from the kitchen. The smell from the kitchen was not the normal smells that use to creep under the door. This smell was something I have never experienced before. Though the door came the smell of damp clay, and something else, and acrid tang like sour vinegar. I wanted to cover the stomach turning smell with a wet towel and tough it in the bin. But I have a feeling it is a lot bigger that just a rotting roast chicken. Unwillingly I walk into the kitchen. It looked completely different to my kitchen. It had a sour milk colored walls. And a pile of dirty dishes in the sink. The smell was coming from the oven. I moved stiffly towards the oven, observing the small space I was in. The bad smell was worse now. I was ready to turn and leave, when I heard a low whine coming from in oven. It was so low that I wasn't even sure I heard anything. "Mmmm...Arrrrrgh." It happened again I knew I had to open the oven door. I walked even faster now. I inhaled a deep breath (the smells of sour wine and moldy filled my head now). I sung the door open. Shocked, scared, dizzy, saddened and sick to the pit of my stomach. How can I feel all of these at once?! I yelled in my mind. The thing cause the smell reached out for me with it's melting arm. "Arrrrr..Hmmm." It whined. 'ARRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!" I screamed with fear.

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