A Week in Hell
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"I guess you could say I'm dead but then you can't because, I'm here right? Wrong I'm here, but not in the here you think."
"Well where are we then if we're not in my house?"
"We're in H-E-L-L! Oh and by the way I'm a messenger god so don't get in the way.
"Hermes?" The god of messengers. you have a daughter."
"Oh just shut-up and keep walking!"
We entered deeper and deeper in to the fired depth of the neurotic waste we call hell. There was a man being whipped he was being asked who his maker was and he yelled "GOD!", and he got whipped again. Out of the corner of my eye I see a black shadowy figure following at a distance.
As we entered the great hall there was a puff of smoke a blinding light and a heat so hot I was baking for about 5 seconds. A tall Greek man with jet black hair, wild brown eyes, and the ugliest outfit a dude in hell could wear.
"Get down girl!" Hermes warned in a gruff voice.
I ducked behind a pillar in the huge establishment.
"What has my brother prepared for me to hear?"
"I brought you his sacrifice. Mariah Akormin. She is a beautiful girl. Blue gray eyes, dark brown hair, slim body build, and hourglass shape."
"She'll be perfect it will find her satisfying!" came a ruff deep voice.
I shuddered. This is obviously a trader of zues. I have to...
My thoughts were interrupted by a sudden pain in my right wrist.
I look down and I see a huge rat blades as a tongue. The rat let go for a split second. The sheer tongue shone in the dim light of the flame.
"OOOOOWWWWW!!" I shrieked
The rat had jabbed its metallic tongue into my arm just above my elbow. Dragging its up my arm so it's immobilized.
"GAH!" I screamed
"Hermes what was that?" the voice said.
"That was Mariah."
"Lovely voice she has."
I grabbed my arm hoping my arm would serve as a band-aid. The rat came to attack again, this time hoping for a large piece of my leg. I grabbed Hermes ankle and pulled....
I woke up in a black pit of something hard and shapely. I lit a match and look down. BONES?! Well this is hell. I heard a small cackling sound. I shined the match in its way.
"Who are you?" I ask
"Heh heh heh!!!" the little voice goes again.
"Well where are we then if we're not in my house?"
"We're in H-E-L-L! Oh and by the way I'm a messenger god so don't get in the way.
"Hermes?" The god of messengers. you have a daughter."
"Oh just shut-up and keep walking!"
We entered deeper and deeper in to the fired depth of the neurotic waste we call hell. There was a man being whipped he was being asked who his maker was and he yelled "GOD!", and he got whipped again. Out of the corner of my eye I see a black shadowy figure following at a distance.
As we entered the great hall there was a puff of smoke a blinding light and a heat so hot I was baking for about 5 seconds. A tall Greek man with jet black hair, wild brown eyes, and the ugliest outfit a dude in hell could wear.
"Get down girl!" Hermes warned in a gruff voice.
I ducked behind a pillar in the huge establishment.
"What has my brother prepared for me to hear?"
"I brought you his sacrifice. Mariah Akormin. She is a beautiful girl. Blue gray eyes, dark brown hair, slim body build, and hourglass shape."
"She'll be perfect it will find her satisfying!" came a ruff deep voice.
I shuddered. This is obviously a trader of zues. I have to...
My thoughts were interrupted by a sudden pain in my right wrist.
I look down and I see a huge rat blades as a tongue. The rat let go for a split second. The sheer tongue shone in the dim light of the flame.
"OOOOOWWWWW!!" I shrieked
The rat had jabbed its metallic tongue into my arm just above my elbow. Dragging its up my arm so it's immobilized.
"GAH!" I screamed
"Hermes what was that?" the voice said.
"That was Mariah."
"Lovely voice she has."
I grabbed my arm hoping my arm would serve as a band-aid. The rat came to attack again, this time hoping for a large piece of my leg. I grabbed Hermes ankle and pulled....
I woke up in a black pit of something hard and shapely. I lit a match and look down. BONES?! Well this is hell. I heard a small cackling sound. I shined the match in its way.
"Who are you?" I ask
"Heh heh heh!!!" the little voice goes again.
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