A Twist in My Story - Part 3
This is the last part of the first story!! Please vote on whether its good or not! :) need the advice! THANKS!!
I walked up behind them horrified of what I saw. My lips were quivering and my hands shaking. Turns out Susan wasn’t dead. She was eating the clerk. Her big black eyes looked up and she hissed. Her mouth was dripping blood and she smiled. She stood up walking towards us, the clicking of her ruby red heels. Her face was torn off and bones chattered. Then out of now where a big wolf attacked her from the side. It slashed and ripped her limbs off. My mom came running to me and hugged me. I stood there memorized by the fierce slashing. Everything tuned out.
I saw my dad rip off Susan’s head as she screeched. He pulled her into a separate room and burned the "leftovers". I flinched with every move someone made. Then Xander came crawling out of a clothes rack beaten up still. He was coughing up blood and Ronnie ran to him. With his touch Xander collapsed and screamed my mom tried running to help him but my dad just held her tighter. I couldn’t handle anymore and just fell stiff as a board. I heard and saw everything around me. My parents kneeling down freaking out, Xander screaming and Drew standing there watching this all happen. All of a sudden my parents stood back up and Xander quit screaming. Charlie laughed. My dads’ eyes filled full of hate. He walked around my parents and me and grabbed Drew’s face. Ryan ran away when he saw Susan.
He threw him into Xander and Ronnie. He growled and went berserk. He thrashed at my dad and my mom ran to the boys. I stood up. I was determined to kill this man. I jumped on his back and bite his arm. My teeth were sharp and so I kept biting and jerked his head back and forth. I shifted into the creature I was when I thought I killed Susan. I tore off his arm and threw him on the ground. He was in pain but that didn’t stop him. The sun was coming up and he lifted his lips and growled deep like a dog. He looked at me then my dad. He smiled his evil grin and said "we will meet again." He ran down the street and when the sun was completely above the hills he was gone. I walked into the shop and hugged Ronnie and Drew. Ryan didn’t come back and I didn’t blame him. Xander was healed but couldn’t move. I picked him up still mad, still strong. Jess pulled up in his small truck. My mom and dad rode in the cab with him while me, Ronnie, Drew and Xander rode in the bed.
When we got home Xander could move but he didn’t talk. He seemed distant. We all did. My mom and Dad hugged me and talked with Jess. Ronnie was asleep on the couch almost immediately and Xander just sat there staring at the tree. The drugs haven’t worn off. Drew and I went outside. It was the first time I ever really looked at him. He was tall, had light brown hair and hazel eyes. He said Toby was his adopted brother and so was Ronnie. They were twins. We talked for hours it seemed and I knew people would start to wonder why we weren’t at school. My parents said they would move back in with me and Jess. Ronnie and Drew would go to Joliet Central High School with me and Xander. Everything seemed normal. It rained weekly and Xander started talking again. Then Oct. 4th was the day he showed up again. Me and Drew were walking to school, since we became good friends, and we heard his laughter coming from behind us. no one was around us, but I know he will keep his promise. He will show up and I will be ready to kill him.
I saw my dad rip off Susan’s head as she screeched. He pulled her into a separate room and burned the "leftovers". I flinched with every move someone made. Then Xander came crawling out of a clothes rack beaten up still. He was coughing up blood and Ronnie ran to him. With his touch Xander collapsed and screamed my mom tried running to help him but my dad just held her tighter. I couldn’t handle anymore and just fell stiff as a board. I heard and saw everything around me. My parents kneeling down freaking out, Xander screaming and Drew standing there watching this all happen. All of a sudden my parents stood back up and Xander quit screaming. Charlie laughed. My dads’ eyes filled full of hate. He walked around my parents and me and grabbed Drew’s face. Ryan ran away when he saw Susan.
He threw him into Xander and Ronnie. He growled and went berserk. He thrashed at my dad and my mom ran to the boys. I stood up. I was determined to kill this man. I jumped on his back and bite his arm. My teeth were sharp and so I kept biting and jerked his head back and forth. I shifted into the creature I was when I thought I killed Susan. I tore off his arm and threw him on the ground. He was in pain but that didn’t stop him. The sun was coming up and he lifted his lips and growled deep like a dog. He looked at me then my dad. He smiled his evil grin and said "we will meet again." He ran down the street and when the sun was completely above the hills he was gone. I walked into the shop and hugged Ronnie and Drew. Ryan didn’t come back and I didn’t blame him. Xander was healed but couldn’t move. I picked him up still mad, still strong. Jess pulled up in his small truck. My mom and dad rode in the cab with him while me, Ronnie, Drew and Xander rode in the bed.
When we got home Xander could move but he didn’t talk. He seemed distant. We all did. My mom and Dad hugged me and talked with Jess. Ronnie was asleep on the couch almost immediately and Xander just sat there staring at the tree. The drugs haven’t worn off. Drew and I went outside. It was the first time I ever really looked at him. He was tall, had light brown hair and hazel eyes. He said Toby was his adopted brother and so was Ronnie. They were twins. We talked for hours it seemed and I knew people would start to wonder why we weren’t at school. My parents said they would move back in with me and Jess. Ronnie and Drew would go to Joliet Central High School with me and Xander. Everything seemed normal. It rained weekly and Xander started talking again. Then Oct. 4th was the day he showed up again. Me and Drew were walking to school, since we became good friends, and we heard his laughter coming from behind us. no one was around us, but I know he will keep his promise. He will show up and I will be ready to kill him.
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