A Second Chance......
I'm not sure that will be the title yet....... so, for now it'll be the title, but while reading it, if you think I should change the title to something, please comment. And tell me if I should continue or not.
Chapter 1:
Going, Going…….Gone.
"She’s dying! Help her." Someone had found me, in the alley, and was fussing over me now. I could feel the blood on my face and the cool air against my chest. All this was nothing compared to what had just happened. I couldn’t believe her, she was my best friend. I trusted her, and this is what she did to me.
"Hey, little girl, can you hear me? Are you alive? Can you open your eyes?" A male voice was asking me now. "Of course she’s alive. You can hear her heart beating and see her breathing. She’ll be dead soon, though. Help her!" That annoying female voice was back again, disturbing my peace. What if I didn’t want to live through this and remember it everyday? What if I wanted to die?
"Stop that, both of you. She’s in a depressed mood. You’re just making it worst, Natalie." Another deep voice was saying now. This voice was calmer than the others, and for a second, made me forget all about what had just happened. A shadow appeared on my eyelids, and a new male voice came, "hey, sweetie, are you alright? Can you hear me? You look pretty bad right now. So me and my friends are gonna help you. You’ll be fixed in no time." That was the last voice a heard before everything blacked out, and I was gone.
Going, Going…….Gone.
"She’s dying! Help her." Someone had found me, in the alley, and was fussing over me now. I could feel the blood on my face and the cool air against my chest. All this was nothing compared to what had just happened. I couldn’t believe her, she was my best friend. I trusted her, and this is what she did to me.
"Hey, little girl, can you hear me? Are you alive? Can you open your eyes?" A male voice was asking me now. "Of course she’s alive. You can hear her heart beating and see her breathing. She’ll be dead soon, though. Help her!" That annoying female voice was back again, disturbing my peace. What if I didn’t want to live through this and remember it everyday? What if I wanted to die?
"Stop that, both of you. She’s in a depressed mood. You’re just making it worst, Natalie." Another deep voice was saying now. This voice was calmer than the others, and for a second, made me forget all about what had just happened. A shadow appeared on my eyelids, and a new male voice came, "hey, sweetie, are you alright? Can you hear me? You look pretty bad right now. So me and my friends are gonna help you. You’ll be fixed in no time." That was the last voice a heard before everything blacked out, and I was gone.
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