A Life No One Wants To Live

This is a poem that explains alot of things a friend of mine endure, and I wanted to dedicate this to her for encouragement. Please comment!!!!!
Surrounded by nothing but darkness,
Don’t know which way to turn.
If I go the wrong way,
no doubt I will surely burn.

Troublesome things,
doesn’t always last.
With time this will soon pass.
You can’t just sit there,
and let it destroy you,
You have to fight back.

Never think you’re the only one,
facing such a life.
There is someone out there that would give up-everything,
make a sacrifice after sacrifice,
just to have a better life.
No one wants this for themselves.
Never hang your pride, courage, and bravery on- a self,
you never know when you'll need it.

By Quenthia Jefferson
Published: 5/2/2008

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