Short Story
A short story I wrote on a dare. This has nothing to do with either of my stories, but I promise, the next chapter will be up tomorrow!
"I glanced over my shoulder, knowing that I shouldn’t have come here. It wasn’t safe; my mother had told me that, but I had ignored her as I always had. And then, a noise broke through the empty, damp air." All right, that seems good enough to post.
"Hey, Sami, my new story is up, you should check it out!" I exclaimed on my best friend’s voice mail. She had stuck with me as I posted my stories, and even began to participate. As a result, we often shared our stories before posting them, but I was confident on this one.
"Hey! I read it! But you should know something…" Sami mumbled into the phone a good four hours later.
"What? Did I make a typo? SMAPT!" we both chorused before she continued.
"Um, no. It’s this…person. They kind of…well. Here’s the comment:
YOUR STORY SUCKS! STOP WRITING! I THOUGHT YOU’D DO BETTER!"
"Oh, well…okay. Like I care," I mumbled back. But I did care. And I needed to do something about it. So I came up with a petition, and posted another story; a short story describing why we needed to get rid of this poisonous commenter. So if Mentor has commented on your story, or a story you love, please press the YES button to GET RID OF HIM/HER! Thanks, and sorry for this, but it needed to be done. Next Camp Heaven will be up tomorrow!
"Hey, Sami, my new story is up, you should check it out!" I exclaimed on my best friend’s voice mail. She had stuck with me as I posted my stories, and even began to participate. As a result, we often shared our stories before posting them, but I was confident on this one.
"Hey! I read it! But you should know something…" Sami mumbled into the phone a good four hours later.
"What? Did I make a typo? SMAPT!" we both chorused before she continued.
"Um, no. It’s this…person. They kind of…well. Here’s the comment:
YOUR STORY SUCKS! STOP WRITING! I THOUGHT YOU’D DO BETTER!"
"Oh, well…okay. Like I care," I mumbled back. But I did care. And I needed to do something about it. So I came up with a petition, and posted another story; a short story describing why we needed to get rid of this poisonous commenter. So if Mentor has commented on your story, or a story you love, please press the YES button to GET RID OF HIM/HER! Thanks, and sorry for this, but it needed to be done. Next Camp Heaven will be up tomorrow!
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