Another Day

A short relatively short poem. please comment I want to know what you think of it.
In your eyes,
The world does stop,
Just one word,
One skip, one hop.
Child again,
On the playing field,
You take my hand,
My life you healed.
One day you're there,
And then you're gone,
Many days blurred,
Into one.

As I grew up,
You never came,
I only wanted,
To see you again.
I had to try,
To forget, to forgive,
To remember how,
I used to live.
Without you there,
When you did go,
Your smile fades,
As I say no.

To see your face,
To remember the pain,
I can't go back,
To your loves embrace.
Your tears fall,
As I walk away,
We'll be together again,
On another day.
What do you think the plot is?
A pet ran away and wants to come back but she wont let it.
A childhood memory while the person is dying.
A childhood lover going away and leaving her but wanting to come back and love her again.
She is just sad.
Dying and leaving a message for her lover.
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Published: 12/23/2010
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