My Angel...

A true story about what happened to my best friend a long, long time ago. (in her point of view)
It was a cool night,
Not too cold, not too hot.
I was walking back home,
When suddenly I heard
A girl scream.

When I turned around,
I saw a man,
Standing over a young girl.

They weren't very far away,
maybe a few hundred feet.
As I tried to call 911,
He noticed me.

It all happened so fast,
It's hard to remember
What had happened.

He came toward me,
Holding something out in his hand.
I didn't have time to think,
He had knocked me down too fast.

And then I realized
What he had been holding out towards me;
It was a knife.
And now that knife was being forced into my chest,
Fast and hard.

Then, Just as soon as it had begun,
It ended.
I was left there,
Lying on the ground, fighting hard to keep breathing,
But the pain was unimaginable.

But just when things started to go black,
I saw her face.
The girl that the man had been rapping,
Was standing over me.

She helped me,
Called the police for me,
But never mentioned her rapping.

Just as I was being loaded into the ambulance,
I turned to her an said,
In a voice so soft you could barely hear,

"What is your name?"
And she answered,
"Angel, my name is Angel."
Ok, this was my first one that I published so be honest, was it ok?
Hell no!
Somewhat
It was fine, but not good
It was ok
It was good
It was great!
It was amazing
Or you think I made this whole story up and you hated it
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Published: 12/3/2010
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