New Story

Hi, I'm a new author, so I was wondering what u guys think about my story! Luv Ava xxx.
Hi, new author, so spare me!
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Intro...
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From the moment I lay eyes on him, I knew we were meant to be. His eyes were amazing. A soft chocolate brown with a dash of electrifying lime, making them easy to lose yourself in. His skin was pale yet tanned. His jet black hair was the kind you really wanted to run your hand through and never stop. That's Alex, my best friend.

I was in 8th Grade when I moved from a pretty little Village in Arizona, called, Jackson's Valley, to hustling, bustling and generally polluted (no offense!) New York. Away from all I've ever known- the School, Village Market, friends, family, Alex...Alex and I never even got to say goodbye. But I'm back and, this time, I'm here to stay...
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Real short? I know. But I wanna see what u guys think!
P.s. - Take the poll!
Luv,
Ava xxx
Do you think I should carry on?
Absoulutely!!!!!! (You'd be crazy not to)
Yeah
Maybe
Dunno
no
No Way!!
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Published: 9/18/2010
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