Letting Go!
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We let go of the old ones.
Along the journey you transform into,
A brand new individual.
Clinging to the past and pain,
Only keeps you away
From love and desire,
Of experiencing life.
Let go the dreams,
Let go of the afore thoughts.
Welcome new beginnings,
Surprises and unforeseen outcomes!
Quit playing, deviate to unknown paths,
And derive joy from failures too!
For not letting go
Would mean expectations
Yearning for what is impossible
And probably losing the
Happiness that could be
Derived along the way
Letting go means
Allowing the goals
To chase you
And not the reverse way
It means:
Being unbreakable
Being free
Until a day comes,
When you would have
To let go everything, and
That "nothingness" would be everlasting!
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