~From The Author of A Dark Pursuit
About a Dark Pursuit
Hey guys! I'm glad people liked A Dark Pursuit chapter 4. I'm currently working on A Dark Pursuit chapter 5. I am glad to say that I've got my writers blog up on mybuzzle. It is under read_a_holic.
Here's some info on the main characters in A Dark Pursuit.
Kier Plyter
Physical description: Very tall, broad shoulders, dark hair, hazel eyes.
Hobby: Archery, reading boring old books.
Character: Possessive, over-protective, arrogant, caring, kind(to a certain extent.)
Favorite color: black and dark green.
(More characters still to come...)
Here's one of my short exercises in the mean time, I intend it to be a story..... tell me what you think!
Title: I'd tell you I love you but then I'd have to kill you.(maybe, may change)
Prologue.
Just two words and I would be happy, just two words and my life would be complete.
He stood before me like a dark angel, devilishly handsome in his tux, and I standing in front of him wearing my wedding dress. He couldn’t see me through my veil but I could see him clearly.
"I do," he said.
The priest repeated the vows to me and that’s when I saw it. It wasn’t clear but I knew it was there, lurking in the shadows. I froze. We had thought it was over, We thought-I thought I was safe, we had never been so wrong…. We could never be together, they wouldn’t allow it, they wouldn’t stop until we were both dead. That’s when I knew what I had to do, no matter how hard it would be. If I loved him enough, I didn’t really have a choice.
I lifted my veil and he looked so surprised and his eyes instantly flashed with concern. I looked at him dead in the eye, knowing what I had to say, what I had to do.
"I’m sorry," I whispered, his face splayed a hundred emotions, some I recognized, hurt, confusion, worry…. "But it’s for the best. I can’t. I’m sorry," I repeated. Without looking back I bolted for the doors. My heavy dress trailing after me, people gasped and started to get out of their seats.
"Stop!" I froze, it wasn’t a request, it was an order, I hated when he did that. I slowly turned around stiffly.
"Why Grace, why? I thought, I thought….well, don’t you want this?" I nearly cried at the look on his face, so hurt so vulnerable. No! I wanted to scream, I’ll always want you more than anything, but don’t you see I ‘have’ to do this, there is no other way. But I wouldn’t tear him or me up any further, I looked stonily into his face.
"I’m so sorry, I have to it’s the only way…." Tears were gushing miserably down my face.
"What? Grace, what are you talking about? What’s wrong," he walked quickly towards me, I had to act quick, for as soon as he touched me, I knew I would be lost….
I bent my head down. I love you and I’m so sorry, I thought. I took one deep breath and looked him dead in the eye. "I just don’t love you anymore," with that I opened myself to the power. I felt the flames licking inside of me. The hem of my dress was engulfed with fire. When he knew what I was doing he ran toward me.
"No Grace don’t!" But it was too late. Completing the phase I grabbed the whole power and embraced it. I was engulfed by flames.
Goodbye…
So that's all for now, I am working as fast as I can to complete a Dark Pursuit 5. In the mean time you can check out my writer's blog in mybuzzle under read_a_holic (if this does not turn into a link visit mybuzzle and look under bees, search read_a_holic) I will be updating that more often, that way you can see how close I am to finishing the next chapter. I will be posting my older stories there to. The Angel's Heart, A Deadly Game, A Dark Temptation(rewrites) and A Dark Pursuit as well. Chapter 5 might appear there sooner than on buzzle. So check that out. Tell me what you think about the story above.
Happy reading!
Try this link that might link you to my blog.
http://www.mybuzzle.com/blogs/posts/read_a_holic
Here's some info on the main characters in A Dark Pursuit.
Kier Plyter
Physical description: Very tall, broad shoulders, dark hair, hazel eyes.
Hobby: Archery, reading boring old books.
Character: Possessive, over-protective, arrogant, caring, kind(to a certain extent.)
Favorite color: black and dark green.
(More characters still to come...)
Here's one of my short exercises in the mean time, I intend it to be a story..... tell me what you think!
Title: I'd tell you I love you but then I'd have to kill you.(maybe, may change)
Prologue.
Just two words and I would be happy, just two words and my life would be complete.
He stood before me like a dark angel, devilishly handsome in his tux, and I standing in front of him wearing my wedding dress. He couldn’t see me through my veil but I could see him clearly.
"I do," he said.
The priest repeated the vows to me and that’s when I saw it. It wasn’t clear but I knew it was there, lurking in the shadows. I froze. We had thought it was over, We thought-I thought I was safe, we had never been so wrong…. We could never be together, they wouldn’t allow it, they wouldn’t stop until we were both dead. That’s when I knew what I had to do, no matter how hard it would be. If I loved him enough, I didn’t really have a choice.
I lifted my veil and he looked so surprised and his eyes instantly flashed with concern. I looked at him dead in the eye, knowing what I had to say, what I had to do.
"I’m sorry," I whispered, his face splayed a hundred emotions, some I recognized, hurt, confusion, worry…. "But it’s for the best. I can’t. I’m sorry," I repeated. Without looking back I bolted for the doors. My heavy dress trailing after me, people gasped and started to get out of their seats.
"Stop!" I froze, it wasn’t a request, it was an order, I hated when he did that. I slowly turned around stiffly.
"Why Grace, why? I thought, I thought….well, don’t you want this?" I nearly cried at the look on his face, so hurt so vulnerable. No! I wanted to scream, I’ll always want you more than anything, but don’t you see I ‘have’ to do this, there is no other way. But I wouldn’t tear him or me up any further, I looked stonily into his face.
"I’m so sorry, I have to it’s the only way…." Tears were gushing miserably down my face.
"What? Grace, what are you talking about? What’s wrong," he walked quickly towards me, I had to act quick, for as soon as he touched me, I knew I would be lost….
I bent my head down. I love you and I’m so sorry, I thought. I took one deep breath and looked him dead in the eye. "I just don’t love you anymore," with that I opened myself to the power. I felt the flames licking inside of me. The hem of my dress was engulfed with fire. When he knew what I was doing he ran toward me.
"No Grace don’t!" But it was too late. Completing the phase I grabbed the whole power and embraced it. I was engulfed by flames.
Goodbye…
So that's all for now, I am working as fast as I can to complete a Dark Pursuit 5. In the mean time you can check out my writer's blog in mybuzzle under read_a_holic (if this does not turn into a link visit mybuzzle and look under bees, search read_a_holic) I will be updating that more often, that way you can see how close I am to finishing the next chapter. I will be posting my older stories there to. The Angel's Heart, A Deadly Game, A Dark Temptation(rewrites) and A Dark Pursuit as well. Chapter 5 might appear there sooner than on buzzle. So check that out. Tell me what you think about the story above.
Happy reading!
Try this link that might link you to my blog.
http://www.mybuzzle.com/blogs/posts/read_a_holic

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