From the author of A Dark Temptation
From the author of A Dark Temptation and the Angel"s Heart
Soooo.. what do you think about my new series The Angel's Heart? Please tell me.
I'm sorry about a Dark Temptation 11, there were some glitches, I think some of the story got deleted when my internet broke down. SOOOO, I'll re-rite chapter 11 and will post Chapter 12 soon.
Please be patient with me, I know I'm not a good writer and to be honest, some people wouldn't believe my age. Soooo.. yeah. Um... I'm not sure If people like the Angel's Heart or not, but I think that if people don't like it I'll stop writing it. So tell me what you think.
But here is another' short story to read in the Mean Time.
Title: (I don't think I have one)
"Kill me, Kat, Kill me,"
I had the knife above his heart.
"No, no, there has to be another way," I sobbed.
He took his hand and held mine, the one with the knife in it.
He guided my hand to his chest and said, "Do it, you have to, I'll not risk your life,"
He made me press the knife into his chest, it only went in at about a millimeter.
"Please Kat, if you love me you will kill me,"
"No..... NO!" I screamed, "I'll not lose you,"
Lightning flashed, illuminating the broken boards around us. We were in a deserted warehouse, dead corpses covered the floor. We didn't have a choice, we weren't going to loose the battle.
He gave me a sad smile.
"Do it, make it fast and quick,"
Another roll of thunder.
"DO IT! Time is running out, I trust you Kat," he said.
I could hear them coming. Their footsteps getting louder. My eyes went wide I couldn't, I couldn't but if I loved him, I'd have to. Tears streaked down my cheeks. He gave me a half hearted smile, "Do it, trust me."
"I love you, you know," I said as the tears streaked down my face.
"I know,"
"I'm so sorry,"
"Make it short and quick," he said.
I just nodded. They were getting closer. I closed my eyes and didn't open them as I raised the dagger and plunged down.
*Please write a comment.
So this is just a short exercise. It may not be good because I'm not a very good writer. But I hoped you enjoyed it!
I'm sorry about a Dark Temptation 11, there were some glitches, I think some of the story got deleted when my internet broke down. SOOOO, I'll re-rite chapter 11 and will post Chapter 12 soon.
Please be patient with me, I know I'm not a good writer and to be honest, some people wouldn't believe my age. Soooo.. yeah. Um... I'm not sure If people like the Angel's Heart or not, but I think that if people don't like it I'll stop writing it. So tell me what you think.
But here is another' short story to read in the Mean Time.
Title: (I don't think I have one)
"Kill me, Kat, Kill me,"
I had the knife above his heart.
"No, no, there has to be another way," I sobbed.
He took his hand and held mine, the one with the knife in it.
He guided my hand to his chest and said, "Do it, you have to, I'll not risk your life,"
He made me press the knife into his chest, it only went in at about a millimeter.
"Please Kat, if you love me you will kill me,"
"No..... NO!" I screamed, "I'll not lose you,"
Lightning flashed, illuminating the broken boards around us. We were in a deserted warehouse, dead corpses covered the floor. We didn't have a choice, we weren't going to loose the battle.
He gave me a sad smile.
"Do it, make it fast and quick,"
Another roll of thunder.
"DO IT! Time is running out, I trust you Kat," he said.
I could hear them coming. Their footsteps getting louder. My eyes went wide I couldn't, I couldn't but if I loved him, I'd have to. Tears streaked down my cheeks. He gave me a half hearted smile, "Do it, trust me."
"I love you, you know," I said as the tears streaked down my face.
"I know,"
"I'm so sorry,"
"Make it short and quick," he said.
I just nodded. They were getting closer. I closed my eyes and didn't open them as I raised the dagger and plunged down.
*Please write a comment.
So this is just a short exercise. It may not be good because I'm not a very good writer. But I hoped you enjoyed it!
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